Wednesday, December 06, 2006

duboya mujhko 'hoanay' ne! mei na hoti tou kya hota?

i was ready to tell
the story of my life
but the ripple of tears
and the agony of my heart
wouldn't let me

i began to stutter
saying a word here and there
and all along i felt as tender as a crystal
ready to be shattered

in this stormy sea we call life
all the big ships, they come apart
board by board
how can i survive
riding a lonely
little boat
with no oars
and no arms

my boat did finally break
by the waves
and i broke free
as i tied myself
to a single board

though the panic is gone
i am now offended!
why should i be so helpless?
rising with one wave
and falling with the next
i don't know
if i am nonexisting
while i exist...
but i know for sure
when i am,
i am not!
but when i am not,
then i am!

since in this world
i have many times
like my own imagination,
died
and been born again

that is why
after a long agonizing life
as a hunter,
i finally let go
and got hunted down
and became free

credits probably go to Moulana Rumi (not sure!)

4 type out ur thoughts:

At 11:18 AM, December 06, 2006, Anonymous Asma said...

Beautiful ....!

 
At 2:02 PM, December 06, 2006, Blogger Pavan said...

amazing ....I say even the word" beautiful" does'nt cover the meaning it provides....
-Blessed blogging!

 
At 7:32 AM, December 11, 2006, Anonymous Saadat said...

Very inspiring. Copied to a text file and saved in my computer's hard disk :)

And yep, that's from Rumi. (Nope, I am not that well-read, I only googled it! ;))

P.S. Love the title too (which comes from an all-times-favourite shair of mine)... Na tha kuch tou khuda tha, kuch na hota tou khuda hota... Duboya mujh ko honay ne, na hota mein tou kya hota... Simply brilliant!

 
At 9:40 AM, December 14, 2006, Blogger ~*Untamed Desires*~ said...

asma : thanx :)

pavan : heyy seeing u here after a while. theres some problem with the blogger and so i am unable to comment on any blog...:(

saadat : thanks...i wasnt sure its Rumi..shud have googled it myself! the shaers definitely zabardast :)

xill : thanks for pointing out the error..since i recalled from memory tou ghalati hogai :(

 

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